You wrote a poem last week. You may use that poem or publish a new poem with a topic of your choosing.
Step One: Post Poem that you wrote this month.
Step Two: Tell me what your poem means.
Mrs. Stansbury
Wednesday, January 20, 2010
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You promised me,
ReplyDeleteYou said you would try,
I believed you when nobody else did,
I don't know,
I want to then I don't,
I know we belong together or do we,
Is it one of those everything happens for a reason,
Do I stay,
Do I go,
What do you want from me,
I told everybody no matter what they said,
I was going to love you anyways,
And you promised me,
What now?
This poem means two different things one is about how this guy kept cheating on me repeatedly over and over again and he kept making promises of how he wouldn't anymore and he still did it so I gave up. The other thing is the deeper meaning which you wouldn't think when you read it is about my dad and all these promises he keeps making me about how he keeps treating me good then bad and always sending mixed signals about everything and how it turely makes me feel about how I always have to make him happy and I dont know how to and that I keep telling everyone how I still love him and always will even after all the stuff he has put me through
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ReplyDeleteCheating;
ReplyDeleteAdrenaline rush;
Heartbreak;
Heavy stomach;
Reputation;
Ruined.
This poem is about cheating. I have been cheated on many times. When you cheat there is a huge adrenaline rush, you are heartbroken, and you have a heavy stomach because you know you've done wrong, and then your reputation gets ruined. This poem is maining about what it's like to cheat or be cheated on.
Anissa Holcomb && Jade Darnell 3rd period
Cheating,
ReplyDeleteAdrenaline rush.
Heartbreak,
Heavy stomach.
Reputation,
Ruined.
-Jade Darnell,Anissa Holcomb.3rd period.
The meaning of this poem is obvious. Just remember the mistakes we make we learn from, and it makes us who we are today. Don't be so quick to judge. Eventually you'll make this mistake.. unless you already have.
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ReplyDeletewiggity wiggity wack
ReplyDeletethese poems are like crack
at first their execiting
and o so inviting
wait, no their not, their stupid.
this was a poem made by me(cedric),chris mattingly, and sam mcgee. chris and i talk about how fun poems are.. and sam freakin ruins it with his dissing of the poem...jerk
wiggity wiggity wack
ReplyDeletethese poems are like crack
at first their execiting
and o so inviting
wait, no their not, their stupid.
this was a poem made by me(chris),Cedric bagwell, and sam mcgee. cedric and i talk about how fun poems are.. and sam freakin ruins it with his dissing of the poem...jerk
"Life"
ReplyDeleteThe life you live is not your own
Your parents will always be home
The yelling bursts into life
I wish now that I wasn't alive
I stand here beaten and in shame
Who is really held with blame
They scream and shout
What is this all about
I thought that it was my life
Why do I feel like it's now not
They always run and take control
I just want you to let go
The meaning of my poem is that life is hard and your parents run it. You can never really have the life you want until you leave and your parents let you go. It is hard to do but it is important to the teenager. At sometime you know that they will have to let you go, it's just about growing up in life.
"Filling In The Blanks"
ReplyDeleteThe feeling we're looking for is.....
Confused.
Lost in every thought,
Like your brain moves at Mach-5.
Sorting through the memories,
the good and the bad.
Ultimately to find joy-
But coming up a little short,
with that easily made mistake,
everything gets chaotic.
Having a lot of time to think...
Isn't all its cracked up to be!
-Sebastian Shaw
This means that with simple mistakes, everything in your life can get jumbled and hectic. And that sometimes sitting down and thinking about everything isn't always a great thing to do. Because it will seem overwhelming and with the pressure people tend to choke and thats never ok in life.
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ReplyDeleteI'M GOD ( Quidditch Edition)
ReplyDeleteBy Tucker Heaton
5th period
Games on BAM! 1,2,3
I'm riding hard on my nimbus 2003
Dodging bludgers and juckin the beater
Mayne I'm so hot I am like a fire-breather
Finding the snitch is hardest its what they say
But it don't matter I am like a bird of prey
You may be smarter but I am faster
Mess with my magic it will be a disaster
BUZZ BUZZ BUZZ, It flies with a daze
But I think it caught the opponents gaze
As I go for a dive the crowd gets pumped
I am pretty sure this guy is completely stumped
Slyhterin snakes are hissing behind me
But right when they hit me I grab something shiny
Yeah we won, I know I am a beast
Now back to Gryfindor, It's time to feast
This means that you should always be confident in anything you do. Confidence is key in many things, plus you should be a beast like me. I mean not to toot my horn but I am a beast at rapping. Just be the best that you can be, give it your all. Everyone is the best at something.
"Live it up"
ReplyDeleteLife is always tough
We all go through hard stuff
Death, depression, break ups, drama
It's all just depressing
When we have these feelings
But in the end, we're happy beings
So never give up, never give in
Because life's too short, you can't live it again
So be content, be positive
You're still so young, so just live.
The meaning of my poem is pretty obvious. It's about not giving up even if life is tough. Hopefully people learn to do so, because then life for everyone would be better.
her love is special.
ReplyDeleteher lov is rare.
her love is sweet but i dont wanna share.
she got me hooked.
like a prisoner being booked.
her love is sweet like grandmas pie.
her love is special but would it die.
this poem really explains itself. its telling you that theres that special that you love and is welling to go all the way but you dont kno if its going to last.
Many people may be around,
ReplyDeletebut no one is truly there.
They say they want to help,
but inside you know they dont care.
You sit there and tell them the truth
knowing they'll go off and tell the world
what you didnt want it to know.
So when you are surrounded by those who "care",
remember they arent there
This poem is about all the people who pretend to care about you but then go off and hurt you or people who say you can trust them but go off and tell people what you didn't want heard.
just an image in your mind
they wont help
the wont care
and no one is really there.
rain, rain heal my heart that is broken apart
ReplyDeleterain, rain up above from the skies
rain, rain pour here and clean my soul
rain, rain there will be rain here, there will be rain there
rain, rain wash away my pain
rain, rain wash away my debts to pay
rain i will do anything for you to cover my tears of shame
this poem is talk about rain . and the rain kame you feel better in you life and u boddy.
Haiyong Ma
6PD
ENG II
Cheating;
ReplyDeleteAdrenaline rush;
Heartbreak;
Heavy stomach;
Reputation;
Ruined;
damaged;
unloved;
&& no trust in self!!!
alycia stewart 3rd period
"Daddy's Little Girl"
ReplyDeleteToyyail Morris 5th period.
she used to be daddy's little girl;
sweet and adorable, basically his world;
but she got older;
then she got bolder;
now shes on the ground crying wishing daddy would hold her;
but he wont 'cause she broke his heart;
she made him cry, so he'll leave her in the dark;
This poem is about a girl who used to be a daddy's girl but then she got older and she started getting disrespectful and she started growing up a little too fast and she ended up breaking her dads heart, and when she needs him he remembers that so he doesn't want to help her with her problems.
Playas Wanna Play;
ReplyDeleteBy: Kristopher Gustafson 3rd
Woke up in the morning look at my phone
Gotta text message from the new girl
She said "Hey baby wakie wakie wake time to go to school You know I gotta see my baby boo"
Get a lil smile as i read
Gonna jump in the shower an get ready
30 mins later I was good to go
Hear my phone ring an I know its gold
Got that new girl as the new ringtone
She textin me again while she at my door
She picking me up so we can get to school
She drive a crystler 300 and its blue
We in the building about to go to class
She trying to give me a hug but I had to pass
Saw a new girl lookin like Mz Berry
She got a banging body I hope she caring
Got a new X girl just like that
Wake up in the morning and start it back.
This poem/song is about a guy that loves to play the field.How he moves from girl to girl like its nothing